Okay, just a few minutes ago, i wrote this song. Not perfect yet and there is no title yet too. I post this video up is because i want you guys to help me perfect this lil song of mine. If u have an opinion please please tell me. If u think this song suck like tahi, please tell me oso. If u think its great, tell me oso. haha. Don't mind my singing and the tempo. Its freaking out but just listen to the ryhme of the song. I'll put up the lyrics so you can tell me bout the lyrics too. And there is no bridge in this song yet. Thank you man. ROCK ON!!! Peace out~

Title: Untitled

Verse 1 :
In the night, i wanted to call you,
but i'm afraid that it'll be too late.
In the day, i wanted to see you,
but i'm afraid that i'm afraid.

Before i sleep, i see your face,
in my mind, running around.
In the day, i'll be thinking of the lines,
when you come near to me.

Chorus:
Don't say no to my love,
i have a heart just for you,
please don't go, don't be afraid,
i'll be here, and i won't go.

Verse 2 :
Look into the photograph, looking at you,
wanted to tell you that i love you.
Talking through the phone, missing you,
how i wish you were right beside me.

It's feel so empty without you,
i don't know what to do.
Few chords in my hand, few words in my mouth,
a song to tell you, how i feel about you.

Chorus:
Don't say no to my love,
i have a heart just for you,
please don't go, don't be afraid,
i'll be here, and i won't go.